Kim presents his suggestions
by taking a before-and-after editing format. He sums up a specific rule and
goes on to tighten a prosaic, complicated and longer sample sentence into a
shorter and clearer one.
Unlike other style guides, Kim’s book stands out
on two fronts. First, he does not go for a boring expository explanation about
the rules. Instead, he often takes a tongue-in-cheek approach to spice up the
tone and amplify the message. “Subprime Sentences” chapter is a case in point:
“All sentences are not created equal, even if sharing the same amount of
texting space. Poorly written sentences -- subprime sentences -- should undergo
‘restructuring’ to make them more viable and value-added.”
The book’s second strength lies in its compact
format and concise style. Each rule is explained in a couple of sentences,
followed by the example sentences in the following pages. Typically, one
chapter is just three pages, and the page is far smaller than the average size
and the font size is pleasantly bigger. All of this, of course, fits Kim’s core
message that “Less is more.”
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